Friday, January 30, 2015

Haikus

Joined a Haiku group. Have no idea how long I will keep up with it but I've never wrote a haiku before. Now I've written like 3 or 4 and I'm so pleased with them lol

The funnest part is it's a game called haiku chase and there is 33 pages of them. They make really interesting reading aloud. The chase works so that the last sentence is the first line of the next haiku.

Heres an example!

Now it needs cleaning,
Large liquid lagoons of life
Cleanses empty souls

Cleanses empty souls
So fresh, so clean, and sparkly
Ripe for new spirit

Ripe for new spirit
Tortured souls feast on corpses
Anguished Surrender

Anguished surrender
I will suffer for Master
The darkness brings light

The darkness brings light
Visible now, horrid sight
Grotesque bed partner

Grotesque bed partner
Medusa of old turns bold
Manhood petrified

Manhood petrified
As ceramic forms take hold
Personalized toys

Personalized toys
Teased from a dirty furnace
Hot, glazed, charred and hard

2 comments:

  1. I like it! Is there other kinds of writing groups too? I liked writing haikus in high school, but I'm much too wordy now. :p I'd like to try to get better at fiction writing, but have absolutely no idea where to go to do that.

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  2. I know that there is writing groups. I don't know where they are but alot of my favorite authors I read give credits to their writing groups.

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